Characters update

I haven't posted in a while and i got quite a bit of work to put up. First off both of my characters have been through some changes leading up to final designs, i haven't posted anything on my female character in a while so i'll do that first.

From my thumbnails i developed these two, the one on the left is the head i liked from the thumbnail page but developed into a full body character, she has the whole distressed and deranged mental patient thing going on. I also gave her a burn scar on her arm, i liked the idea of her being a bit messed up due to a childhood trauma. The other design is more psychotic criminal looking, in handcuffs, tattoos and markings on her body.

From there i went onto this character who was kind of a mix of traumatized mentally ill killer, thought he character was a little bland, i felt if i was going to go with this kind of graphic novel style deranged mental case girl i may as well go full on.

so since i found the last design to be quite lack luster i went back to the basics with it her and looked at the silhouette, trying to make it stand out more and be more unique than she originally was. From these i liked numbers 3 and 5 the most, the kind of medicated look of them both, i also like the kind of reckless look of number 5.

Here is the design i developed. I like the kind of disregard for her appearance  like she is out on the wings and doesn't realize her fashion faux pas. I've started modeling her but I've been wondering weather or not i should change the see through shirt  to give her a more distinctive shape, i think i will change the hair when it comes to modeling the head.